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June 19

amid the thunder
sheltered sparrows chattering
petrichor rising
(C) EPM

Comments on: "June 19" (6)

  1. misfit27 said:

    I needed to hear your voice today and center me. Thank you.

  2. Great!

    You could even dispense with ‘ chattering’ as we know they do that anyway, and let the haiku resonate with that amazing last line, with that verb, even more!

    e.g.

    amid the thunder
    sheltered sparrows
    petrichor rising

    warm regards,
    Alan

  3. Nothing beats that petrichor. 🙂

    • Intriguingly my comments alert email had the verse as a monostich:

      amid the thunder sheltered sparrows chattering petrichor rising

      I really like it as a one-line haiku (traditional Japanese format for haiku). 🙂

      Alan

  4. Oh… no sun out my window right now – rain maybe on the way.
    Better get my washing off the line… 🙂

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