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Easter Monday April 13

in lockdown quietness
pine cone
clicks opening in the suns warmth
.
another
small
moment passes
.
(C) EPM tauku-piku

Comments on: "Easter Monday April 13" (7)

  1. misfit27 said:

    Again your ability to see life anew in the simplest everyday is extraordinary. Pine cones opening to the sun’s warmth….what does it say about us? Love to you and your family.

  2. Wasn’t sure if this one single poem, but wondered, re:

    in lockdown quietness
    pine cone
    clicks opening in the suns warmth

    in lockdown quietness
    pine cone
    clicks opening in the suns warmth
    .
    another
    small
    moment passes

    Maybe re first stanza:

    lockdown quietness
    the pine cone clicks
    opening in the sun’s warmth

    or

    lockdown quietness
    the pine cone clicks
    opening into the sun

    And then this wonderful second stanza

    another
    small
    moment passes

    Just a thought.

    Alan
    http://www.callofthepage.org

  3. Lovely captured moment.

  4. With all the rain we had… I actually saw one of my pine cones with roots sprouting from all of its seeds. Each scale is a single seed. (I wasn’t aware of that – I thought the whole cone was one huge seed.)

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