limbo days
time for reflection–
the moon in a puddle
(C) EPM
December 27
December 27, 2019
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ORIGINAL VERSE:
limbo days
time for reflection–
the moon in a puddle
Lovely verse. You could make it a haiku (for Autumn) by keeping the first line, losing the second line, making ‘the moon’ the new second line, and ‘in a puddle’ the new third line?
Just a thought,
Alan
Thanks Alan
What a gem! Love the last line.
Perfect for the new year. Reflection and continuation with the revolution of Luna (and sol).