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December 27

limbo days
time for reflection–
the moon in a puddle
(C) EPM

Comments on: "December 27" (4)

  1. ORIGINAL VERSE:

    limbo days
    time for reflection–
    the moon in a puddle

    Lovely verse. You could make it a haiku (for Autumn) by keeping the first line, losing the second line, making ‘the moon’ the new second line, and ‘in a puddle’ the new third line?

    Just a thought,

    Alan

  2. What a gem! Love the last line.

  3. Perfect for the new year. Reflection and continuation with the revolution of Luna (and sol).

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