From tiny beginnings to oceans I discovered the world in words

28 days into July

wheel spray lifts a swirling mist
car travels on cloud burst
this wet motorway journey
..
home gutter overflows
rain drums on car roof-
my fingers tapping
I wait for a lull to get out-
no luck
..
pouring rain-
clouds
around my boots
..
Elaine Patricia Morris (c) 2019
..
#reversehaiku #gogyohka #piku

Comments on: "28 days into July" (8)

  1. Love this as a haiku!

    pouring rain-
    clouds
    around my boots

    But without the hyphen, so maybe with an N–dash?

    e.g.

    pouring rain–
    clouds
    around my boots

    warm regards,
    Alan
    Call of the Page

  2. Cool!

    Alan Summers
    Call of the Page

  3. It’s a North Wales trip then?

  4. Love this, so atmospheric. Loving those clouds around your boots!

  5. I love these especially how you’ve woven in the clouds and in the opening haiku, the spray.

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