From tiny beginnings to oceans I discovered the world in words

Haiku pair

these windscreen wipers
accelerate as i do-
driving summer rain

it’s mizzling wet
the horizon is closer-
diamond strung wash line

Elaine Morris (c) July 2016

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Comments on: "Haiku pair" (4)

  1. I can see and feel your rainy day through your haiku, lovely,,,

  2. We had some rain yesterday. Mostly calm until the thunderstorms in the evening.

  3. excellent last line – totally transformed the haiku pair!

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