From tiny beginnings to oceans I discovered the world in words

Autumn Equinox

Rainbow heat haze moves
Aurora round the diamond
Sun sparkling through trees

Sky’s rosy eyelid closes
Moon rises, autumn equinox.

Comments on: "Autumn Equinox" (3)

  1. I’ve only been out to get the paper and put out the trash. But it seemed comfortable enough. Still haven’t turned on the heat yet…but I suspect soon.

    Lovely tanka.

  2. the last 2 lines in particular are very vivid and sent a shiver down my spine!

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